The Message (Poem by Duncan Campbell Scott)

Duncan Campbell Scott’s “The Message” is a gentle love poem in which the speaker asks the summer wind to carry a message of affection to his beloved.
Moonlit Lilacs on the Wind

The Message
By Duncan Campbell Scott

Wind of the gentle summer night,
    Dwell in the lilac tree,
Sway the blossoms clustered light,
    Then blow over to me.

Wind, you are sometimes strong and great,
    You frighten the ships at sea,
Now come floating your delicate freight
    Out of the lilac tree.

Wind, you must waver a gossamer sail
    To ferry a scent so light,
Will you carry my love a message as frail
    Through the hawk-haunted night?

For my heart is sometimes strange and wild,
    Bitter and bold and free,
I scare the beautiful timid child,
    As you frighten the ships at sea;

But now when the hawks are piercing the air,
    With the golden stars above,
The only thing my heart can bear
    Is a lilac message of love.

Gentle wind, will you carry this
    Up to her window white;
Give her a gentle tender kiss,
    Bid her good-night — good-night.

Poem Analysis:

Duncan Campbell Scott’s “The Message” is a gentle love poem in which the speaker asks the summer wind to carry a message of affection to his beloved. Through images of the lilac tree, the night sky, ships, hawks, and a “gossamer sail,” Scott explores love as a delicate emotion that can exist alongside strength, fear, and emotional uncertainty.

The wind is the central symbol of the poem. At first, it is described as powerful enough to “frighten the ships at sea,” suggesting the speaker’s own passionate and unpredictable nature. However, the speaker asks the wind to become gentle and carry the fragrance of lilacs to his beloved. The contrast between the wind’s strength and gentleness reflects the two sides of the speaker’s personality. He admits that his heart can be “strange and wild, / Bitter and bold and free,” yet at this moment he longs only for tenderness and love.

The lilac is another important symbol. Its delicate fragrance represents the speaker’s love, which he describes as a “lilac message of love.” Unlike a direct declaration, this message is carried indirectly through nature. The speaker’s love is therefore presented as delicate, intimate, and almost fragile. The repeated references to gentleness reinforce the tenderness of his feelings.

Scott also uses contrasts effectively. The frightening image of ships at sea is placed beside the delicate scent of lilacs. Similarly, the “hawk-haunted night” creates an atmosphere of danger and darkness, while the “golden stars” and the “lilac message of love” introduce beauty and hope. These contrasts suggest that love can provide emotional peace even in a world that contains fear and uncertainty.

The poem’s language and rhythm contribute to its musical quality. The regular rhyme scheme and repeated words such as “wind,” “frighten,” “gentle,” and “love” create a soft, song-like movement. The final stanza is especially tender, as the speaker asks the wind to give his beloved “a gentle tender kiss” and bid her “good-night.” Rather than demanding anything from her, he expresses his love through a quiet and respectful gesture.

Overall, “The Message” presents love as both powerful and fragile. The speaker recognizes his own passionate nature but desires to communicate only tenderness to the woman he loves. Through the symbolism of the wind and lilac, Scott transforms a simple message of affection into a beautiful meditation on love, vulnerability, nature, and emotional restraint.

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